Thursday, March 14, 2013


Spotlight

"Ok, remember  we have to stick together," said William to me and Janelle. 


A s we were climbing up we could hear the wind howl and the spotlight was shimmering into my eyes.

"Duck," I whispered softly to William and Janelle.  All of - a –

sudden William drifted away into the darkness,  Janelle and I were all alone.  “William, “William, “William? I whispered looking around. It was pitch black, you could only see spotlight and shadows of people, crawling up the hill, “Duck” I whispered. 

So we sat there for a while waiting for the spotlight to stop shining on Janelle and I.

 “Ow’’! I shouted. 

”What”? whispered Janelle,
 “I got stung by a wasp," I panicked.

“I will get some help” said Janelle. 

We went down the hill and went to bed.

8 comments:

  1. Sorry for drifting away.

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    1. you didint know DID YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. Well that story really showed how u were feeling... especially when u were stung by a wasp! I like how u said I got stung by a wasp I panicked instead of just saying ... I got stung by a wasp I said!!

    Well Done!! :)

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  3. That was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much fun at Te Wera camp!!!! I like Spot light, Flying fox, brow and arrow, Jungle Jim and Waterside!!

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  4. did you get cry!!! did you get stung!!!

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