Thursday, March 14, 2013

seal entry by Eli


Seal entry


                         
When I sat in my kayak I look at the hill. I was a little bit unsure about going down into the water  Mrs McA  let go of the kayak and I slipped down the hill  Splash, I plunged into the water. I carried on in  my wet kayak. I went up the hill again . This time I was a little bit more confident. I was siding down the hill and I hit myself on the lip with the paddlee and the trees nearly threw me off the kayak . I glided onto the water then it was time to leave .          

Eli




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