Showing posts with label Liam. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Liam. Show all posts

Friday, December 6, 2013

The capture


We are writing the scene talked about in our class book. The rats tell about when they were living in a village and went to the Sunday market to eat the leftovers. The men from the laboratory come and capture some. This is that part written. Can you build up pictures in your head from our writing. can you imagine the scene?


Hi I’m Liam and I’m a rat, our lives are not easy. Every Sunday my family goes down to the nearby market to get food for the week.

One day when we went down there we noticed that something was wrong. There was much more food than usual but we went over anyway.

Later a truck came we try to get away as soon as possible so we wouldn't get seen. The next thing we know, swoop, a net flew past me, I ran into the shadows but they were just too fast.

Five minutes later I thought they had all gone so I came back out to find that they were still there, but once again all of them went to catch me all at once. “Help!” I screamed but no one could hear me.

They made me run for so long that I ran out of energy. I stopped to take a breath but I was too late. I was in the net trying to get out, but it was no use.

I was trapped with no way out.

Friday, November 29, 2013

Liam

Liam getting very excited when he was writing on google docs and suddenly a comment from Mrs McA popped up!

Wednesday, November 13, 2013

Things that annoy me


1: The thing that annoys me the most at the moment is my computer it won’t go properly. 
2: I don’t like the fact that the pizza at school is a rip off price.
3: I think doing the dishes at home is annoying because my sister doesn’t help me when she should.
4: I hate using the photocopier in room 12 at school there is always an error with it.
5: the ICT men who came into our class didn’t position the active board projector properly.

My life would be so much better if these didn’t happen!!!

Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Personification writing ~ Liam


He stares at me with an ugly look. The horrible stench of his breath comes out as he opens his mouth.               



Friday, October 18, 2013

spelling liam

today i have made a huge improvement with my spelling. I only got 2 wont wrong when I did the test.

Wednesday, October 16, 2013

Rain Liam

The splashing noise that always wakes me up like a giant hose dripping on the roof. I wish the crashing noise would stop soon so I can get some sleep by tomorrow. Next I decided that I should check the time it was 11 o'clock, how am I supposed to get to sleep now. Later the noise was slowly get quieter until it had finally stopped I was so relieved that it was all over. 

Friday, September 20, 2013

Petronas Chapter 2


Chapter 2
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The girl was hiding behind a large rock. She put a hand over her black eye and stared at the wavy patch of sand nearby.
"Baba, Baba!" Tulsi was calling out in his irritating, mosquito voice.
She put her hand over her blue eye and squinted at the patch. Hmm, still wavy. Odd. She hadn't seen sand like that before. It looked like the heat waves that shimmered over the desert on a very hot afternoon.
"Baba," squawked Tulsi.
"Oh, go away," she murmured under her breath, "you stupid boy."
As if obeying her command, like the ever-faithful servant he was, Tulsi's whining voice started to recede, fading into the distance.

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He was probably going back to the camp for reinforcements.
With a sigh, Baba stood up, smoothing down the front of her golden smock, and stepped towards the wavering patch of sand. All around her was the usual desert: rocks, gravel, sand, the occasional cactus or spindly tree. Overhead was the usual creamy blue sky.
One step, and the soft leather of her sandal touched the wavy sand. Nothing happened. Not that she was expecting very much to happen, but still . . . Disappointed, Baba turned around to go back to the camp herself. But now, instead of the usual rocks and sand, there was grass: long, luxurious grass.
The girl gasped. She turned around on the spot. She was standing in a field of grass that stretched away to the horizon. Not a horrid cactus in sight. And over there — what was that?
Baba shaded her eyes with her hand. White buildings.
"Ha!" she cried.
She was about to rush towards the buildings
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know how to ggghdfghfgh get back to the desert. Looking around, she found a trampled circle of shivering grass. That must be where she came through — like a door, of sorts. Baba whipped off her red silk scare and looped it around a bunch of upright grass. There — she'd be able to find that again.
Baba set -off at a trot, her golden tunic flapping in the breeze, the grass slapping at her soft trousers.
A blank, smooth wall of pale stone rose up from the ground ahead of her. Beyond were the roofs and windows of buildings. Panting, she slowed to a walk. She had never seen anything like it. Not even at the market town where the desert prince lived.
Who would live in such a place? What kind of people? She hoped they would be friendly. But then, she was Baba, the leader of her people — others might not have heard of her, but that didn't matter.
She was closer now — and approaching an arched entrance way. Through the arch she could see a beautiful yellow tree. Baba stood with her
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ands on her hips, looking up. A single word was etched into the white stone: Petronas.
Baba held her breath and took a step forward. Despite herself, she was listening hard. If she heard a shout or a cry, then she would run very fast back to the desert.
But all was silent. Not even a bird sang.
The girl stepped into a large courtyard and looked up at the tree. It was so lovely. Trees like that did not grow in the desert. Now, something else caught her eye. Could it be?
Baba gasped, then laughed out loud.
It was a miracle — a dream come true.
Tulsi ran back to the camp in a panic. "She's
gone, she's gone," he cried to the first person he
bumped into, who happened to be Baba's aunt.
"Calm down, Tulsi," said Aunty "Tell me what's happened?'
"We were playing hide-and-seek, up there around the big rocks?' The boy, his skinny frame shaking with anxiety, pointed further up the
Text Box: LI!valley where enormous rocks were scattered like giant marbles. Once, many years ago, a mighty river would have flowed through here. "And now I can't find her."
Aunty patiedjulsi's shoulder. "Don't worry, she'll just be hiding."
"But I've looked everywhere," he wailed. "What's up?" asked Jad, Tulsi's father. "Tulsi's lost Baba," said Aunty, smiling
thinly.
Jad nodded sagely. "Baba will come back when she's ready."
"Don't worry about Baba," adsed Aunty. "Come and help us with the cactus."
Tulsi sighed and followed her over to the makeshift kitchen. Others were already sitting around on mats, cleaning and slicing the cactus pads. They wuld be cooked into a stew that night for dinner. It was one of Tulsi's favourite meals. Not that he enjoyed dealing with the prickly cactus.
He sat on the mat next to his sister, Ming. She was a year younger than Tulsi, but she was still able to clean and slice up a cactus pad in

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Text Box: LI!valley where enormous rocks were scattered like giant marbles. Once, many years ago, a mighty river would have flowed through here. "And now I can't find her."
Aunty patiedjulsi's shoulder. "Don't worry, she'll just be hiding."
"But I've looked everywhere," he wailed. "What's up?" asked Jad, Tulsi's father. "Tulsi's lost Baba," said Aunty, smiling
thinly.
Jad nodded sagely. "Baba will come back when she's ready."
"Don't worry about Baba," advised Aunty. "Come and help us with the cactus."
Tulsi sighed and followed her over to the makeshift kitchen. Others were already sitting around on mats, cleaning and slicing the cactus pads. They would be cooked into a stew that night for dinner. It was one of Tulsi's favourite meals. Not that he enjoyed dealing with the prickly cactus.

He sat on the mat next to his sister, Ming. She was a year younger than Tulsi, but she was still able to clean and slice up a cactus pad in\

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less time than it took him just to remove the spines with a sharp knife.
Ming gave him a sideways look. "Lost her again, have you? What's that Baba done now?" she asked.
"Nothing," muttered Tulsi.
He didn't understand why some of the girls didn't like Baba. Jealous of her special treatment, he supposed. There was no chopping of cactus or gathering of herbs or milking of goats for Baba. For himself, he was proud to be her attendant. All of the Babas, stretching back through generations, had had their own attendant.
Baba's cousin, Tai, who was cutting up a cactus pad on a flat rock, laughed. "Maybe she's back in her tent, eating sweetmeats."
Tulsi blushed. She was talking about the last time he had lost Baba, only to find she had double-tracked back to the camp without him. But what if something had happened to her and he wasn't there to help? A snake could have bitten her. Or she could have fallen into a hole and hurt her leg. It was his job to look after

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Baba. Though she didn't make it easy for him.
Tai jumped to her feet. She started mincing up and down, flipping a pretend scarf over her shoulder. "Look at me," she simpered. "I am the great Baba. Seehow beautiful I am!"
The other girls were falling over themselves laughing.
Tulsi's blush deepened. "Stop it," he muttered. "She's not like that."But the girls just laughed harder.


Then somebody said, "Shush — she is coming!"Ming hiccuped and hid her face in her hair.
At the edge of the camp, Baba had appeared. Had she heard them? With her chin in the air, the girl walked through the camp. She did not even look at the girls around the cooking area, but went straight towards her tent.
Tulsi hurried over. At the tent flap, he gave his usual cough. "May I enter, oh Baba?" No reply. He crept in through the flap and knelt on the soft mat. Baba was sitting cross-legged on a cushion at the back of the tent. Quirt was nestled in her lap. "Call the elders," she said, not looking at Tulsi, "I have found water:'




Monday, September 16, 2013

Atom Rat's Diary

Monday : the sun was shining in my cage so i sun bathed.

Tuesday : Mum discovered me , she took me out and gave me cuddles

Wednesday : Mum came in and cleaned my cage and had a friend come over and look at me.



Wednesday, September 4, 2013

School mornings - Liam

 I just wake up.

I don’t know what wakes me – just all of a sudden I wake up. Sometimes I lie there for a bit.

I hear curtains being pulled. I sometimes I hear the shower running. I don’t hear my sister starting up she starts up late. I get up as the bathroom door opens it was Mum and she says to me “are you getting ready”

“I’ve just got out of bed,”  I said walking past her. 

"OH NO, IT’S A SCHOOL DAY AGAIN!!!"

Wednesday, August 21, 2013

About Frankley School

Hi everyone
Liam and Mrs McA thought we had better put something in our blog about where our school is after searching one quad blog and not being able to find out where they were from....

So we are in New Plymouth, Taranaki and here we are on a google map.