Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Personification writing ~ Liam


He stares at me with an ugly look. The horrible stench of his breath comes out as he opens his mouth.               



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  1. AnonymousOctober 30, 2013 at 9:10 PM

    Absolutely perfect Liam. Who chose the bin as the object to personify???! Could I please have your permission to use that as an opening line (or two) in our library blog?

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