On Wednesday I went to Bmx with
my Mum and Dad. I maked same non friends Sarah and Brooke. My friend Evan das bmx with
me. Evan love bmx and I love bmx too. When
I am at the gate I get very very nervous.
Then I shoot out like a cheater.
When I was racing one person pulled the break and I kept on going I was
coming first. I went too high on the berm
then Brooke past me. Then I was coming 2nd and that was aill ridt so I com 2nd.
I was so pafed. I got a l&p drink. A
lot of poelp said that I was very good.
great story patch i was very intrigued by the way you described your race
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Hey Patchy, awesome story about BMX club night. Good effort with the writing, good to see. From Leith & Jo.
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