The capture

We are writing the scene talked about in our class book. The rats tell about when they were living in a village and went to the Sunday market to eat the leftovers. The men from the laboratory come and capture some. This is that part written. Can you build up pictures in your head from our writing. can you imagine the scene?

Hi I’m Liam and I’m a rat, our lives are not easy. Every Sunday my family goes down to the nearby market to get food for the week.

One day when we went down there we noticed that something was wrong. There was much more food than usual but we went over anyway.

Later a truck came we try to get away as soon as possible so we wouldn't get seen. The next thing we know, swoop, a net flew past me, I ran into the shadows but they were just too fast.

Five minutes later I thought they had all gone so I came back out to find that they were still there, but once again all of them went to catch me all at once. “Help!” I screamed but no one could hear me.

They made me run for so long that I ran out of energy. I stopped to take a breath but I was too late. I was in the net trying to get out, but it was no use.

I was trapped with no way out.