Friday, December 6, 2013

The rats

                                           
We are writing the scene talked about in our class book. The rats tell about when they were living in a village and went to the Sunday market to eat the leftovers. The men from the laboratory come and capture some. This is that part written. Can you build up pictures in your head from our writing. can you imagine the scene?

the rats


I see all the rat's sprinting to hied.  I see rat's getting chased and caught.  A net flew past my home.  One of the rats was bleeding and one had its tail cut off.  Some rats got caught.  The people got some and went away.



1 comment:

  1. Must be a scary life been a rat. Great story and imagination. Keep up the great writing.
    From Leith & Jo.

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