"Jo, me and patch are going on the scooter."
"See ya," said Mum
"Patch we don't have any pechall, We wiil yuos turps, don't tell Mum."
" Bye Mum".
"Dad can we go see Kalm and chas".
"OK".
"Patch we are rning out of turps, we have to go homes".
"OK Dad."
Dad got me a scooter helit for me, so I can go on the scooter tothor
By Patch
Patch, I was so impressed with your writing today. You have used speech marks well and you knew to start each new speaker on a new line. Well done. ( You also told me how fast you and Dad went on the scooter!!!!)
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