The Rats at the Market!!
I stared at
the men, and they stared back. They charged at me like a bull. He started to
get closer and closer as I started to get dizzy. I melted into a shadow so
they ran straight pass me. Then I felt a swish of cold air sprint pass me and I
realised I was surrounded in a bumpy net.
I open my
eyes slowly, everything was blurry. I heard a deep low voice saying “We found
some rats.” Then in an even deeper voice replied “So what.” As the voices
started to get closer I scrambled in and hurried towards the net. Then I heard
another voice that sounded like a girl saying “SEE” when the men went away, the
girl said, “Hang in there” in a whisper “I’ll get you out"...
By Brylee
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