Wednesday, December 11, 2013

TRAPPED - Billie w


                         TRAPPED

I squeaked in terror. Then I felt weak as the thick black shadow covered me. The big net came over me, I felt powerless. I tried to squeak for help but all that came out was a little ''Squeak''!

I ran around the net franticly, ''What were they going to do with me''? ''Where were they going to bring me''? ''Will I die?"
 ''BANG"! I was in this big truck, then I was off with the tall giants.
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  1. Mum and DadDecember 14, 2013 at 8:32 PM

    Very good descriptive writing Billie, well done!.

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