Wednesday, September 4, 2013

School mornings - Liam

 I just wake up.

I don’t know what wakes me – just all of a sudden I wake up. Sometimes I lie there for a bit.

I hear curtains being pulled. I sometimes I hear the shower running. I don’t hear my sister starting up she starts up late. I get up as the bathroom door opens it was Mum and she says to me “are you getting ready”

“I’ve just got out of bed,”  I said walking past her. 

"OH NO, IT’S A SCHOOL DAY AGAIN!!!"

3 comments:

  1. Great to read your writing Liam and to hear your personal voice coming through - the voice that calmly wakes, builds tension and momentum, then finally SHOUTS! Thanks for sharing
    Mrs C

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  2. Hi Liam, Good to see you are writing. Well done, Mum

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  3. Fantastic story Liam. Who did you think it was first?

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