Friday, September 13, 2013

The bird I found - written by Jacob F

“Poor thing” I said finding it on the ground. Only the size of my toe and him/her was on the ground under the lemon tree not able to protect itself from the cold air. It made a small chirp calling for its mum but nowhere near loud enough. I decided the little bird was in harm’s way I did not want to see a tiny bird get shredded to pieces by a big fat 7 kg cat!

Mum picked up the bird and said “Jacob you have saved him/her” I felt like a shining star. We put the bird in a warm box (like spa pool). The nest was nowhere in sight and we did not know the number of the vet.

 Lucky for us mum had a friend that takes care of a heap of baby birds that lost their mum and dad’s. They were not home but there was a box that we were meant to put the bird in. We put the bird in the box and went home.


When we got home the cat meowed he was hungry so we gave him some cat biscuits.  

2 comments:

  1. That was a really nice thing to do Jacob! I loved your description.

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  2. Jacob, I enjoyed your story - some of the worsd you chose to leave really make an impact on the audience. Like -'shredded to pieces by a big fat 7 kg cat'

    We also have a very fat cat at the McAllister house.

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