My Dog- Shikain

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My Dog

I have a dog her name is Jade she is 3 years old. Soon she is going to have puppys! She has fur like a sheep and she is really play full. She is Poochon.

When we go dirt biking sometimes she gets in the way. Sometimes we have to slam on the breaks because we don’t want to run her over. When she does this our faces go red and we shake our heads with laughter.

She is really hilarious when she hops out of the bath and charge’s for my sister’s room. When I run and stop she freeze’s like she is a sculpture.

We always hide her ball under the couch’s pillowand she makes crack up noises when we hold her back. If we let her go she digs her head in the couch. When we throw the ball for her she gives it back.

Once when she was a puppy we took her to the lake and brought her ball. We threw the ball in the lake and she jumped straight in the water. Ten seconds later she zoomed back with speed. When she shakes the water off her fur she becomes a big fluffy dog and the water drop spread every where. She stops shaking and runs over to get the ball and it is all soggy like bread that is wet.

By Shikain.