Spilling Blood - Isaac

My face was spilling out blood making stains on the concrete and on the deck. I screamed, "MUM, CAN I HAVE SOME HELP? PLEASE. My face is pouring out with blood."

Mum came running and shouted, What's happened to my baby?" (that's not really what mum said, but it sort of is!). What Mum really said is, "I think this is a job for the hospital."

"AOOOO," I said sounding worried because I had never been to the hospital before and the hospital seemed scary!!!!!(not the place I wanted to be)

There is more to come - what do you think of the start so far.......