This is my writing from today. How does it make you feel? Have you ever had an accident?
My split open
head
I was at nana’s house and we went in the camper
bus. I hit my sister and mum tried to
smack my bum and we were fighting over the broom. Mum let go of the broom and I
fell back! And I landed on a metal sharp corner. I had a bang go off in my
head. I ran into the bus bedroom and something was dripping from my head. I
felt my head and I looked at my fingers. It was BLOOD I screamed as loud as i could I ran
out to mum. I panicked mum took me out side nana got a tail to put on my head.
I threw the wet tail far away. Mum felt horrible for dropping me. We went straight
to the doctor’s to get my head glued. It was time for me to see the doctor for
me to get my head glued. When we got in she told me to stay still. She had to
clean my head after she got the glue I stayed still one drop she put more on
and it stung like hell. I cried for a little while. After my head felt all
Beter. When we got home I had a rest on the couch and I watch TV. In the
morning I felt so much pain in my head it like a rocket set off in my head.
It was the scariest day of my life.
by shikain
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