Thursday, September 12, 2013

Chocolate

The mouth watering creamy chocolate desolves  in my mouth,
the soft chewy chocolate bounces on my tongue,
The milky chocolate trickles down my throat.
I LOVE CHOCOLATE!!!

By Brylee

4 comments:

  1. Great adjectives Brylee. We have been reading Charlie and the chocolate factory in one of our reading groups. The children have had fun making advertisements.

    Mrs Christenson

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  2. Christine (Brylee's Mum)September 12, 2013 at 10:03 PM

    Great writing Brylee, I can almost taste the chocolate in my mouth.

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  3. Well done! I love Chocolate

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