Monday, September 9, 2013

100WC - By Lucy


I could feel the fish wriggling and squirming, I looked down into the water, I could see something wobbling, trying to escape from my line. Finally I could just make out the shape of the fish, it was long and fat. My hand was going wild, winding the handle. The huge fish was getting closer and closer. Finally the fish popped out of the water, splashing me with sticky salt water. It’s pink, slimy skin dripping onto the side of the boat, sending shivers down my spine. Flapping around on the end of my fishing line was a disgusting eel!      

3 comments:

  1. Wow that's real cool Lucy

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  2. This is a very good story with very descriptive words. It is good that you included the picture so people knew what you were writing about.

    Marlon Year 6

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  3. You matched the picture very well!!
    The story was very interesting. Most of the stories here were boring so I just went to a different blog, but right now I'm sooo into your story!:)

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