Friday, March 15, 2013

Seal Entry - Connor

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‘My face look’s worried as Mrs McA is hanging my kayak over the edge of the slimy goo’. I shoot down the goo as fast as a car splash as I hit the water yay that was fun. Seal entry two. This time my face looks not as worried woo as I almost slip down the grassy hill. Wow I zoom down the grassy waterslide as fast as a rocket ship that was fun.
By connor.     

                                                                                                        

1 comment:

  1. I really liked your start where you talked about hanging over a cliff!! Well done Connor.

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