Saturday, March 16, 2013

MY BLOODY ANKLE!!! ( A BIG story!!!) Gregor


MY BLOODY ANKLE!!!
“I’m just walking around minding my own business when a ten ton alligator comes out of space!!!!!!”
“That never happened”
Yeah huh!” 
Nuh uh!” 
 “Yeah huh!!”  
NUH UH!!!”   
“Fine! You got me."

 I bent down by the river admiring the water then I felt uncomfortable in my shoe so I took it off and found a pebble in it. 

Then all of a sudden an eel sprang out of the water biting me and thrashing around.

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!” I screamed out in pain, I kicked the eel back into the water. I watched it slithering back into the river. Here comes the hour walk back to camp with Mrs Mca (the longest hour of my life UGH!!)  

1 comment:

  1. I like how when you were shouting you made the righting bigger . That must hurt when you get bit by an eel .

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