Saturday, March 16, 2013

Seal Entry - Isaac


Seal entry

I sat down I’m ready I said with excitement. Then Mrs Mca let go. I plunged into the water. I didn't get wet or fall in and I did it over and over again. I held on tight to the paddle, tight against my chest. Suddenly I slowly started moving "are you ready?"

" "yes" I replied. My paddle brushed against the bushes. SPLASH water flowed into my kayak.

 




 



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  1. molly:)April 19, 2013 at 11:56 AM

    well done thets a cool story i like the big splash

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    1. molly:):{:}}April 19, 2013 at 11:58 AM

      thats really thats not thets sorry

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2013 at 7:24 PM

    Great story Isaac. I like how you told the feelings. Was it fun?

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