Thursday, March 14, 2013

Seal Entry by Patch




Seal Entry
I shot out like a bullet but I was in a kayak.  I was fast like a seal. Some of the kayak kids did the seal entry. The front of the kayak went into the water. I was in a fat kayak. I did it in a thinner one too. My dad Leith pulled my group in the kayaks out of the water. We got to sit in the kayaks. I could go forwards, backwards, turn and go sideways. I was nervous. I put the paddle on my chest. I felt like I was going to flip out of it!

3 comments:

  1. Cool story Patch. Looks like you had heaps of fun. From Mum (Jo)

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  2. I love the descriptive words you are using in your story Patch. I would have been nervous too! I hope you get a chance to kayak again.

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  3. Hey Patchy,
    Looks scary, you're da man! Great story too, keep up the good work.
    from Leith (dad)

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