Wednesday, August 7, 2013

The pink rose by Brylee

The curly petals are like a spiral, The Crystal white water slowly drips off, The pink soothing rose heavens my hands.
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  1. Room !!August 7, 2013 at 8:26 PM

    Very cool Riceie!!!

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    1. Room !!August 7, 2013 at 8:30 PM

      thanks dad!!! ( by the way Riceie is my nick name because i have rice bubbles for breakfast rice crackers for lunch and rice for tea ) from brylee

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  2. Mrs McAllisterAugust 7, 2013 at 8:28 PM

    Nice words, what a pretty spiral shape. Well done , where did you fin the photo? I don't think there are roses out at the moment.

    Mrs McA

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    1. Room !!August 7, 2013 at 8:36 PM

      thanks!! I found the photo from piclits and copied and pasted it because i didn't Know how to save it on piclits

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  3. Mrs McAAugust 7, 2013 at 8:35 PM

    Oh, I see , I was wondering where that came from?? :)

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  4. Chris CopestakeAugust 8, 2013 at 2:29 PM

    Beautiful writing Brylee! I look forward to seeing more posts from you now that you know how. Keep up the good work. :)

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  5. JanelleAugust 13, 2013 at 6:20 PM

    That was my favourite rose in the whole world!!!!! where did you get that from!!!!!!!

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  6. JanelleSeptember 21, 2013 at 8:39 AM

    Well done Brylee

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    1. BryleeOctober 17, 2013 at 6:45 PM

      Hi Janelle thanks for the nice comments,
      I got the photo from piclits!!

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