Thursday, August 29, 2013

A cute furry creature - Natalia

A small pink nose and quivering whiskers, buggish eyes black as onyx. Thin ears on a small pointed head, a warm body on legs, with scurrying feet. Covered all over with fur, except, for their long snakscale tail. Their tail's all hairy, pink and p r i c k l y, watch those rats, they move soooo quickly!

By Natalia

3 comments:

  1. Beautifully written Natalia - it sounds so great when you read it with that little rhythm it has ..
    Thanks

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  2. Natalia, I have tried to block out my prior knowledge about rats and I'm sure that even if I had never see or felt one I would know exactly what rats looked like from your very poetic description. Thanks for sharing.
    Mrs C

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  3. you got lots of in for mation!!information

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