Waterside!
I went down on waterside it
was really fun. There was dishwashing liquid to make us go
faster. I said weeeeeeee as I went down
the waterside. I felt happy after the waterslide. There were parents at the bottom
taking photos of all the children
Great to see your photo and I'm glad you enjoyed the waterslide at Te Wera.
ReplyDeleteGood story Janelle
ReplyDeleteAwesome story
ReplyDeletegood story ... william wrote that up there that says billie. silly william.
ReplyDeleteNO I DID NOT!
Deletecool story. i enjoyed the waterslide too :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome photo janelle!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nikaela - I asked Janelle to get a comment from home - she is working hard and really enjoying her new laptop!!
DeleteWHEEEEEEEEEE! Your writing makes me feel that I am sliding down there myself. I'm pleased that you start and end your sentences so clearly with good punctuation Janelle. It makes it so much easier for me to read and helps your writing to make sense.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing.
Mrs C
sounds like fun janelle
ReplyDeletei had lots of fun on the water slide
ReplyDeleteNice photo Janelle
ReplyDeleteit was so Awesome Te Wera!
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