I can imagine the huge relief of the voyagers when they felt land under their feet Keiran. Eventually / heaved / extremely jagged rocks, words with an impact that makes the reader sit up and take notice. I wonder though if I could get a job with the Billybob News when I leave my classroom. They certainly need an editor to help with the punctuation of this author's writing. It's difficult to work out where one sentence ends and another begins! Mrs C
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I can imagine the huge relief of the voyagers when they felt land under their feet Keiran. Eventually / heaved / extremely jagged rocks, words with an impact that makes the reader sit up and take notice.
ReplyDeleteI wonder though if I could get a job with the Billybob News when I leave my classroom. They certainly need an editor to help with the punctuation of this author's writing. It's difficult to work out where one sentence ends and another begins!
Mrs C