Thursday, February 28, 2013

Archery

I pulled back hard and closed one eye. Everyone was starring at ME, it felt like the whole world depended on my shot!!My legs were shaking like there was an earthquake. I focused my eyes right in the middle of the target. I pictured myself winning;it felt amazing, I let go "twaannngggg" it hit just out from the middle, a smile spread across my face I had a warm feeling inside.
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  1. Billie wFebruary 28, 2013 at 7:30 PM

    Cool story Lucy!

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  2. Cara (Shanras Mum)February 28, 2013 at 8:01 PM

    Fantastic story Lucy, felt like I was there!! Great punctuation too!!

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2013 at 8:17 PM

    Wonderful personal voice Lucy. I can feel your immense satisfaction at hitting the target and the onomatopoeiac 'twang' has me standing right there with you.
    Mrs C

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  4. ShanraMarch 1, 2013 at 6:44 PM

    awesome story Lucy and the message that kate left Is really cool

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  5. EvetteMarch 1, 2013 at 8:07 PM

    Awesome use of words and similies Lucy!!!:)

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