Its interesting that you can get such good personal voice into a news report Liam.Your voyage to New Zealand has obviously been really unpleasant for you, but I'm a little concerned that the London News does not have an editor to check on the lack of capital letters at the beginning of the writers sentences??! Mrs C
sounds like these people had a terrible time getting there it must have been very hard to understand what the people were trying to say. i wonder how hard life would have been for those early settlers?
Maybe they were so hungry they had to eat all the capital letters?
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Its interesting that you can get such good personal voice into a news report Liam.Your voyage to New Zealand has obviously been really unpleasant for you, but I'm a little concerned that the London News does not have an editor to check on the lack of capital letters at the beginning of the writers sentences??!
ReplyDeleteMrs C
sounds like these people had a terrible time getting there
ReplyDeleteit must have been very hard to understand what the people were trying to say.
i wonder how hard life would have been for those early settlers?
Maybe they were so hungry they had to eat all the capital letters?
Nick Hobo (Evette's Dad)