See if you can find the Sarcasm and Exaggeration in this piece of writing. Please Comment!
Swimming
Sports
“Time to get up”
“But mum…”
“Yes?”
“My tummy hurts!”
“You are just hungry”
“But mum…”
“What!?”
“I can’t find my hair brush”
“You hate brushing your hair!”
“But mum…”
What now?”
“Aliens stole my school bag”
“You can use your brothers’ old one”
“But mum…”
“There is
nothing for lunch”
“I went
shopping last night”
“But mum…”
“Yes?”
“It’s raining”
“Oh that’s
terrible! What ever shall we do?”
“But mum…”
“Can I help
you?”
“I don’t want
to go to swimming sports”
“Really, well
that’s convenient because swimming sports is tomorrow.”
“I knew that…”
By Zoe and Liam
My Mum always shows genuine empathy with me.
ReplyDeleteYEAH RIGHT!
Excellent use of punctuation Zoe and Liam.
I REALLY find it easy to create all the punctuation I need to use, especially speech marks, when I am writing in the first person or present tense!!!
Mrs C