Homework
“Do your homework”
“But Dad…”
“What?”
“I want to go see Justin bibber”
“I love Justin Bibber”
“But dad”
“What now”
“Do your homework then I will do mine!”
“I don’t have homework now you do yours!”
“But dad I’m tired”
“It’s only homework”
“But dad”
“What”
“Mum cut it in half”
“That’s like mum”
“But dad”
“What now?”
“I don’t…”
“Say it”
“I don’t want to do my Maths!”
Gosh guys, I hadn't stopped to think before reading this about how important punctuation is. Without all the speech marks and especially the exclamation marks you have persevered to use, I wouldn't 'hear' the exaggeration and sarcasm. This piece of writing would have no impact at all.
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Mrs C
That was AWESOME storyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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