Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Journal - One hour of my life


Journal— One hour of my life

I raced through the bush, under the electric fence into the horse paddock. Every time I do this I get REALLY dirty. Mum usually gets angry if the clothes are my jeans and a good t-shirt. I could see the horses, munching the fresh, crispy green grass. I could hear the CLIP CLOP of the horse hooves as the horses trot about. I went up to Billy Jo and felt her soft, silky coat and the tangled mane that I love to untangle and plait again and again. I walked around her keeping my hand on her back so she knows where I am.

This could be VERY DANGEROUS if you don’t know how to act around horses. She nuzzles up to me when I get back around, trapping me in her neck. I could smell the warm, grassy breath of her. I went over to Deanna. She is another horse that is with the R.D.A, she is black with a white star on her forehead. She is a beautiful mare calm and gentle I think they are very LUCKY to have her. Billy Jo came up to us, I hugged them both and they wrapped their necks around me so tight I couldn’t breathe. When they finally let go they start to look anxious. I checked my watch it was the time they usually start running about. They do this usually around the same time every day. I walked to the fence and watched them run around for a bit. It makes me feel as if I was drifting away from where I was watching
and feel like I was running free with them.
 
By Evette
 

 

3 comments:

  1. Hi Evette, I really enjoyed reading your story about the horses at the end of the garden.
    Love Dad

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  2. hi evette i loved this piece of descriptive writing, thank you for sharing.

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  3. Hi Evette
    I've just read this again after seeing your Mum left a comment and I do so agree with her - what a lovely piece of writing - trapping me in her neck. - wonderful words - I know just what you mean - Keep up this writing - and so much you do because you just love writing!!
    Mrs McA

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