Can you see the patterns in this writing? We also tried to use exaggeration and sarcasm!! You may notice some of our writing on the blog - leave us some feedback please.
Friday, June 28, 2013
Collaborative Writing - Photos - ask a Room 11 person to share
Can you see the patterns in this writing? We also tried to use exaggeration and sarcasm!! You may notice some of our writing on the blog - leave us some feedback please.
skoddle reflection
on skoddle I have nearly completed my stars I only need to do personal star and anti bully star. I liked super clubs better and think It should come back do you agree?
IKAN test By Billie W, Evette and Isla
IKAN TEST
Can you find the exaggeration and the sarcasm. Give us feed back in the comments!!
“Hurry up and get out of bed”
“But MUM”
“what?”
“I can’t get out of bed”
“Why”
“I just can’t”
“Why? I’m running late for work”
“My head hurts I think it's broken”
“ Really”
“Yeah”
“time to go to the hospital then” (rolling eyes)
“Oh, no I feel better now”
“uh huh then get out of bed”
“but mum …”
“what? I am late”
“George pinned my pjs to the bed”
“Really i’ll call dad to get the pins out then”
“Oh yeah nah I just got them out”
“as if”
“Um well”
“yes”
“i….”
“keep talking”
“don’t want to..”
“spit it out”
“do the ikan test?”
“Oh my gosh seriously”
See if you can find the Sarcasm and Exaggeration in this piece of writing. Please Comment!
Swimming
Sports
“Time to get up”
“But mum…”
“Yes?”
“My tummy hurts!”
“You are just hungry”
“But mum…”
“What!?”
“I can’t find my hair brush”
“You hate brushing your hair!”
“But mum…”
What now?”
“Aliens stole my school bag”
“You can use your brothers’ old one”
“But mum…”
“There is
nothing for lunch”
“I went
shopping last night”
“But mum…”
“Yes?”
“It’s raining”
“Oh that’s
terrible! What ever shall we do?”
“But mum…”
“Can I help
you?”
“I don’t want
to go to swimming sports”
“Really, well
that’s convenient because swimming sports is tomorrow.”
“I knew that…”
By Zoe and Liam
Homework by Will.i.am Conner ang Patch
Homework
“Do your homework”
“But Dad…”
“What?”
“I want to go see Justin bibber”
“I love Justin Bibber”
“But dad”
“What now”
“Do your homework then I will do mine!”
“I don’t have homework now you do yours!”
“But dad I’m tired”
“It’s only homework”
“But dad”
“What”
“Mum cut it in half”
“That’s like mum”
“But dad”
“What now?”
“I don’t…”
“Say it”
“I don’t want to do my Maths!”
Thursday, June 27, 2013
Patch's reflection on today
I really liked learning about learning. It made me think about if there was on learning the world would not be the same.
I think that learning can really help me to become smarter.
connor's learning
Today I learnt a new game it is called six ball. You have to pass the ball to the player in your team six times. You had to think about strategies - find space, on defense get in front of thr others and intercep the ball.
Kieran's learning
Today I learnt a new game called 6 ball. The objective of the game is to pass the ball round within your team mates until you get the ball passed around 6 times.
I like the game because because it was a really active and fast and technological game.
You also had to think lots and lots.
I like the game because because it was a really active and fast and technological game.
You also had to think lots and lots.
2 things that I did today jake
today we played a new game called 6 ball. I enjoyed it because its the first game we have played in a long time.
Horses!!!!
Hi!! Here are some photos of the horses that I took. For as most of you know I LOOOOOOOOOVE horses so so so so so much!!
Cricket
Below Percy
Me and Maiden Below
Me and Billy JO
Ropeswings!!
Ropeswings
Evette and Brylee
Evette and Brylee
As I flung my head back as I went soaring through the air like a whizzing tournado scooping up everything in its path. Then pooof. I thought it had stopped but no I was wrong as it started swirling around again. My head was dizzy with sudden suprise. My mind was lost as it started to get faster. I was lost MINDLESS.
Wednesday, June 26, 2013
Learning......
What is learning?
- It is a way to Communicate with the world.
- It is a way to discover who we really are in OUR life.
- It is a part of our personality and who we are.
What are the steps of learning?
- Learning it simply by the basics.
- Experimenting with it, it doesn't matter if you get it wrong.
- Perfecting it.
- Teaching it to others.
How do you know when you have learnt something?
- When you feel you are capable to teach others and make something REALLY happen in the world.
You must WANT to learn something before you TRY to learn something.
- It is a way to Communicate with the world.
- It is a way to discover who we really are in OUR life.
- It is a part of our personality and who we are.
What are the steps of learning?
- Learning it simply by the basics.
- Experimenting with it, it doesn't matter if you get it wrong.
- Perfecting it.
- Teaching it to others.
How do you know when you have learnt something?
- When you feel you are capable to teach others and make something REALLY happen in the world.
You must WANT to learn something before you TRY to learn something.
Monday, June 24, 2013
Nikaela
Nikaela
Nikaela
lives in Wellington! Nikaela goes to university! At the moment she is sitting
exams! Nikaela lives with Sharleen in Wellington! Nikaela will be coming back!
Nikaela is going to watch Maeghan and I at production song dance! It was so
much fun! I stayed with them at Easter! Stayed with them! She is coming home
soon for a holiday! She will drive home in her car! It will take her five
hours! She will stop in bulls for lunch! Nikaela's works in subway in Wellington!
She works in subway at Stratford when in Taranaki! Nikaela’s grandad has come
to see us! He went to the rugby last night with dad! We like him he is really
nice! We are to see Kaylum play indoor cricket! Then dad is going to take us
for a dvive! I hope grandad buys us an ice cream! He is going home on Tuesday!
We will be sad when he goes!
The End!
By
Janelle
Friday, June 21, 2013
Mid winter swimmers !!!
Watch the video or read the article in the Taranaki News
Wednesday, June 19, 2013
football jokes
Q: What tea do footballers drink?
A. PenalTea!
Q: Why are soccer players excellent at math?
A: They know how to use their heads.
A. PenalTea!
Q: Why are soccer players excellent at math?
A: They know how to use their heads.
Our room11 class room treaty
INSPRING
CREATIVE
LEARNERS
A week ago our class brainstormed some ideas regarding our class treaty and how we should respect others....
What learning habits does the Frankley student have?
How should we treat others?
How does the ideal Frankley student learn?
How does the ideal Frankley student speak to others?
How does the ideal Frankley student behave?
What values and attitudes do Frankley students have?
Here we have a small Tagxedo that represents our school.
Now we have some class members talking to you.
1. We will have a positive attitude to learning.
2. We will speak with a clear confident voice.
3. We will protect and promote our Maori culture.
4. We will all ways give 110% at everything.
5. We will work as a team like we are one big family.
6. We will listen to instructions and ask for help if we don't understand.
7. We will take pride in what we do.
8. We will look for solutions not problems.
9. We will stay focused and on tasked.
10. We will always be respectful to each other.
Thank you
Room 11 hope you have a great time looking on our class blog.
Tuesday, June 18, 2013
Journal - One hour of my life
Journal— One hour of my life
I raced through the bush, under the electric fence into the horse paddock. Every time I do this I get REALLY dirty. Mum usually gets angry if the clothes are my jeans and a good t-shirt. I could see the horses, munching the fresh, crispy green grass. I could hear the CLIP CLOP of the horse hooves as the horses trot about. I went up to Billy Jo and felt her soft, silky coat and the tangled mane that I love to untangle and plait again and again. I walked around her keeping my hand on her back so she knows where I am.
This could be VERY DANGEROUS if you don’t know how to act around horses. She nuzzles up to me when I get back around, trapping me in her neck. I could smell the warm, grassy breath of her. I went over to Deanna. She is another horse that is with the R.D.A, she is black with a white star on her forehead. She is a beautiful mare calm and gentle I think they are very LUCKY to have her. Billy Jo came up to us, I hugged them both and they wrapped their necks around me so tight I couldn’t breathe. When they finally let go they start to look anxious. I checked my watch it was the time they usually start running about. They do this usually around the same time every day. I walked to the fence and watched them run around for a bit. It makes me feel as if I was drifting away from where I was watching
and feel like I was running free with them.
By Evette
Friday, June 7, 2013
Funny jokes
Q: Why did piglet look down the toilet.
A: Cause he was looking for pooh!!!!
the other day i went fishing and it was hot and cold in other words warm!!!!
Jake and Kieran co-op jokes
A: Cause he was looking for pooh!!!!
the other day i went fishing and it was hot and cold in other words warm!!!!
Jake and Kieran co-op jokes
Thursday, June 6, 2013
My diary in the 1950's By Billie K
My
diary 1n the 1950s
Dear
diary I woke up and the man of the house was already at work I found a note
that said
Sorry I left so early for work but when I return dinner
must be cooked the kids have to be feed and washed and the clothes if the
clothes aren’t washed l will be mad
So I washed and feed the kids I cooked dinner
and cleaned the house and then took of my cleaning clothes and had a rest, four
minutes later the door swung open and then I heard a big I’M HOME
I jumped with fright ''welcome back''
he said are the kids feed, washed and put to bed and is dinner cooked and are the clothes clean yes, yes and yes ''ok good now show me dinner!''
We ate but I was just a bit frightened to talk
THE END
BY Billie k
My Diary in the 1950's By Brylee
Rapare, 6th of June
We don’t have a fan at home I just suffer. It’s not very nice trying to clean the house with a pooy smell in the air and he gets to work with air fresher. but on the other side all he can see is a grumpy boss and a pile of work. When I get to see my children and a nice clean house at the end. So that’s my life good and bad…..
By Brylee
1952 Diary
17th June 1952
Dear Diary, Today my husband, Bob, went to work as usual and left me a note:
This is what happens every day! He just leaves me to clean everything up, put everything away, get the children clean and cook the dinner. The children almost never get to see him he is always going off everywhere to meetings. Every day I am used to this but today I had just had enough! Why can’t we swap lives for a month! But I suppose I have to work otherwise he will NOT give me my weekly pay. I wish that with a snap of my fingers all my work will be done! But unfortunately that’s not how it works.
So, to start off the day, I whizzed my hair up into my curlers and got to work. I scrubbed the dishes so well that I could see my reflection! I could really feel my arms aching from doing the dishes when I was vacuuming the children’s rooms.
At lunchtime I made some sandwiches with sausages and tomato, then after we had all eaten, straight away I got back to work with bathing and showering the children until they were as shiny as the clean dishes in the draw! I picked out some clothes for them and then I shimmied them into their clothes and then sent them to their rooms to read.
I started on the dinner, I popped the chicken into the oven and prepared a salad. When I finished the dinner I laid it on the table and quickly whipped around the house tidying and straitening until it was spic and span.
I zoomed back to my bedroom and took my curlers out of my hair and got out of my cleaning clothes and lay down on the couch for a rest, when suddenly the door burst open and it was Bob he was home early!
“Is everything clean, is I all tidy, is the dinner ready? Where are the children?” He exclaimed.
“Yes…Yes and Yes…. Oh and the children are in their rooms reading, waiting for you to get home.”
“Oh Mara, You work too hard, here is your weekly pay” he said as he handed me some money, wait a minute; this is DOUBLE my normal pay. I looked up at Bob, he smiled, “Thank you Bob, thank you”.
Dear Diary, Today my husband, Bob, went to work as usual and left me a note:
I am so sorry I had to leave so early I had a meeting
That I could not miss, it depends on my whole job!
If everything is not done I will NOT be happy.
See you tonight.
“Yes…Yes and Yes…. Oh and the children are in their rooms reading, waiting for you to get home.”
“Oh Mara, You work too hard, here is your weekly pay” he said as he handed me some money, wait a minute; this is DOUBLE my normal pay. I looked up at Bob, he smiled, “Thank you Bob, thank you”.
The life of a husband and wife in the 1950's
1950’s
Woman: Hi my name is Samantha and I’m a house wife. Every day all I do is clean and clean and cook and so much more!!! My husband goes out and works all day, man would I like to be him. It must be awesome seeing the city during the week. I just wish I could have a day out with the girls. But no its just kids and my husband. Well I do get to go out on the odd Friday night.
1950's Man: Hello my name is mike and I’m an ordinary man from the 1950s. I work all day every day, its not that fun. I mean I have to deal with being late for work due to the traffic and my boss isn’t that nice either. Sometimes I wish I got to stay home all day like my wife. Sometimes I think that my wife thinks that my job would be awesome, yeah right. Its horrible and painful, well mentally painful. But it’s just life.
Room 11 Students Feature in the Omata School Newsletter - Patch, Nikki, Jake and Liam
Omata School had this group of very talented Room 11 children visit them to find out how Omata promote and protect the Maori Culture an Language at their school. You will have to ask them what they found out. Or leave a question in the comment box - they may well leave you a reply!!
Wednesday, June 5, 2013
Shikain's new dirt bike
On Monday I was sitting on the couch and mum came in and said "what's that noise out there?" then I herd something out side It was the sound of a motor bike . I saw my dad on the dirt bike aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! he went all the way to Auckland to buy it, I couldn't believe It was a motor bike yaahoo I hoped on the bike with dad !!!! It was the right size for me. we had a ride down the street I cant wait for a helmet so I can ride It all by myself. It might be a 95cc or a 85cc. The helmet has been sent today it might come tomorrow or the next day I have to behave to be allowed to ride .
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