Thursday, November 14, 2013

the swamp - written by Shikain


The swamp           

“Patch hurry, the sun is going down and if it’s down can’t see anything”, I yelled out to Patch. If we were late and can’t make it we will have to build a hut and make a fire. I can go slowly because my gumboots are flooding with mud from that sinking mud.


 “It’s about a mile away”, said Patch, “and we forgot our jackets. And when get back to the house we will wash our legs and have dinner.” We all agreed with it.

We had to cross broken trees and we wanted to be on Man vs. wild.  We got out of the bush and onto the farm land. It was a steep hill and Patch’s house was behind a fence. When we got to the house we had to wash our feet big time and then patch’s mum asked if I wanted to stay for fish and chips. I said yes please with my manners.

I want to go back there. It was so much fun. 

1 comment:

  1. Shikain - great to work with you on using speech marks - try this again. I enjoyed hearing about your adventures in the swamp. I use to build tree huts in the swamp.

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