I could feel the
fish wriggling and squirming, I looked down into the water, I could see
something wobbling, trying to escape from my line. Finally I could just make
out the shape of the fish, it was long and fat. My hand was going wild, winding
the handle. The huge fish was getting closer and closer. Finally the fish popped
out of the water, splashing me with sticky salt water. It’s pink, slimy skin
dripping onto the side of the boat, sending shivers down my spine. Flapping
around on the end of my fishing line was a disgusting eel!
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Wow that's real cool Lucy
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good story with very descriptive words. It is good that you included the picture so people knew what you were writing about.
ReplyDeleteMarlon Year 6
You matched the picture very well!!
ReplyDeleteThe story was very interesting. Most of the stories here were boring so I just went to a different blog, but right now I'm sooo into your story!:)