rats ~ Jacob

     We are writing the scene talked about in our class book. The rats tell about when they were living in a village and went to the Sunday market to eat the leftovers. The men from the laboratory come and capture some. This is that part written. Can you build up pictures in your head from our writing. can you imagine the scene?   


  The trick

My feet started to take me away. All I could hear was frantic screaming and shouting from other rats. Big giants got most of them stuck in unchewable rope. Lots of the rats were stuck but I was yet to be captured. I felt shaky and gripped with fear. I could not see any other rats around me so that means I am next.

        

Then I saw something falling. To my horror I realised what it was. A giant hand that was about to grab me but I rampaged away. I found a way out and sprinted to my escape I ran like a rocketing race car.

“Don’t let him escape!” screamed a voice. It felt like I was getting chased by a mob of rampaging elephants. His hand right behind me about to close in. 

“Snap!” His hand closed at just the wrong time. The lady gripped me weakly but I quickly slid out like an oily fish.I was so close I was sure I could escape. 

“Bang!” My head hit into an invisible wall as If I was hit with a hammer. Everything started fading and all I saw was blackness. So close yet so far away.

     

 Everything came into vision again. I found myself in a small room.

“Look the injection worked!”  

“Yes!, the resurrection worked! I thought he was long gone when he hit the window ” I heard a lady say.

“Great we can test him with our new DNA” said the leader.

“Injection time,” said a man holding a pointy pin and a needle In his hand.

Jeffrey

      Jeffrey chapter two

“Put your hands up where I can see them”

said a police from the building to Jeffery. Instead Jeffrey pressed a red button. boom! The tower exploded and crumbled like an avalanche and turned into debris and dust. Two helicopters came. Jeffrey quickly pulled out a rocket launcher boom! One helicopter fell. “open fire”! The other helicopter started shooting teaching dirt how to fly.”Dang I lost him”. Police started rampaging after Jeffery.

“Hes getting away release the guard dogs” all the dogs ran slobber dripping showing too many sharp teeth like a knife.   

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atoms diary
Monday	I got rescued from a lab by a nice girl called Millie
Tuesday	She hid me under the bed to protect me from the giant(mum) she gave me Weetabix for breakfast
Wednesday	The room was really messy but then she decided to tidy it for some weird reason?  Her mum figured they were running out of cereal and soon would find me
Thursday	I figured out why she was tidying her room because it stops mum (giant) from invading the bedroom.
Friday	The mum came in looking around in her tidy room but I was hidden.
Saturday	The giant came in with pancakes I needed some but I was found!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lucky mum let  Millie keep me
Sunday	I was happy

The bird I found - written by Jacob F

“Poor thing” I said finding it on the ground. Only the size of my toe and him/her was on the ground under the lemon tree not able to protect itself from the cold air. It made a small chirp calling for its mum but nowhere near loud enough. I decided the little bird was in harm’s way I did not want to see a tiny bird get shredded to pieces by a big fat 7 kg cat!

Mum picked up the bird and said “Jacob you have saved him/her” I felt like a shining star. We put the bird in a warm box (like spa pool). The nest was nowhere in sight and we did not know the number of the vet.

 Lucky for us mum had a friend that takes care of a heap of baby birds that lost their mum and dad’s. They were not home but there was a box that we were meant to put the bird in. We put the bird in the box and went home.

When we got home the cat meowed he was hungry so we gave him some cat biscuits.  

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Karakia and Waiata - Our thoughts

Karakia feeling for a starting day

May the day start with a breeze let the wind blow away the bad feelings. We will warm up together and have a great starting. Let the positive feelings blow into us.

Let little ones grow and giant ones look after each other. Let birds fly and the trees stand tall together. We will keep on learning no matter how old we are. May we be curious and persist in what ever activity.

We will have a great starting. Nothing should get in the way of the great day. We have a lot to go and heap to discover. Lets not stop till the sun goes down and the day ends.   

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Nightline by Jacob

It was night! A night on the nightline, but in this story nightline turns into nightmare! When on the nightmare we get attacked by a small creature with black and yellow stripes. They can sting as many times as they want and they work in a swarm. “Muh, ha, ha, ha, he, he!”

I watched as the sun came down and day turned to night. I was brave, brave enough to go on the nightline. I got ready, I was going to do this. 1, 2, 3! I started the nightline but I had a bad feeling. I kept it to myself. Later on I thought “Nah, nothing’s going to happen or will it?”

I ate boysenberries even though they might be poison berries or sour. Here comes the rope. I gripped onto the rope not letting go as the hill was steep. There was a cliff beside it. Some people didn’t hold onto the rope because they didn’t think they needed it but then they slipped over. We were near the end of the track then. “Ow!” I felt pain by my waist. “What was that?” We kept on walking still wondering why my waist hurt. I decided it was a prickle. I put my hand down by my pants. Then, “Ow, my middle finger hurts”. “What’s going on?” Then I realised this was a wasp attack!

 Oh no, one stung. When you get stung it sends out a smell, a smell that attracts more wasps. This is going to hurt, it will hurt for other people too. “Ow!” My foot. Heaps of other people were saying the same thing and if you’re not listening, just in case. “Ow!” ZZZap! “Ow!” My nose! Wait my nose! That’s close to my eye. “Get it off, get it off!” I started screaming. “Get it off, get it off!” There was a gentleman behind me that thought, right, that’s enough! He started pulling the wasp off my nose but it was trying to hold on. It was saying “Leave me alone you beast, stinging people is my duty!” “You!” PLUCK! The wasp came off, then SPLAT, squashed to juice.

Then, still screaming because there was still one on my foot. It’s going to sting me, it’s going to crash. The gentleman crushed it. It was still alive so I kicked it away. WHOOSH – it was flying and straight into an ants nest. “Kill him” screamed the King of the Ants. “Wait, wait, this is a mistake!” said the wasp. “I’m an ant with a costume on”. Too late, the ants had already eaten him alive!

Anyway, I got rushed out of the bush and into the area where people went when they got hurt. Freezing cold ice packs on me. I was suffering from pain. I had spray on. I was in my bed, I was having nightmares then Ow! My legs hurt. I went to see what it was. Then ZZZap a hundred wasps came out from my pants. AAAAARGGGH!! Then I woke up. And since I was having nightmares, I was sleeping with Mum and I fell asleep quickly. When I woke up I didn’t think "breakfast", I thought "that was no Nightline that was a Nightmare!".

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