TRAPPED - Billie w

                         TRAPPED

I squeaked in terror. Then I felt weak as the thick black shadow covered me. The big net came over me, I felt powerless. I tried to squeak for help but all that came out was a little ''Squeak''!

I ran around the net franticly, ''What were they going to do with me''? ''Where were they going to bring me''? ''Will I die?"
 ''BANG"! I was in this big truck, then I was off with the tall giants.

Panic~William

Panic

I was waiting for the signal. I looked around at the other rats, they looked so much older than me. Most of them were 20 or 30, but I was only 12.

    Soon the signal was sounded, we ran as fast as we could, to steal as much as we could. Then I heard a rattle of small cages and the squeaking of rats. I looked behind me and saw a large person lowering his hands to grab me.

    Just with one touch I laid down pretending to be dead. Like most other rats but they weren't pretending. The person walked away with the cage in his hands. When I saw that he left I got up and ran, I ran as fast as I could and hide under a small box and melted into the shadow.

    Then when it was all quiet I snuck out but it was the wrong time. SNAP!!!!

I was loaded into the truck and taken away. In that cage I wondered where were they taking us, and will I escape? Then all that I heard for the rest of the ride was rats in panic.

CAPTURED - Gregor

We are writing the scene talked about in our class book. The rats tell about when they were living in a village and went to the Sunday market to eat the leftovers. The men from the laboratory come and capture some. This is that part written. Can you build up pictures in your head from our writing. Can you imagine the scene?


I charged at the left-overs like a crazed bull. Suddenly I felt a net slip over me with excrutiating speed and force.


I struggle, tossing and turning,  trying to nibble out of this night-mare, but the net is as thick as plastic. Not giving up I give it one last bite...


I managed to break free! I scamper away from that horrid place with my scrawny little legs and reach a bench! I fell safe enough to take a rest. So I did. But I never awoke again.

The rats of nimh -Abby

THE RATS OF NIMH

It was a usual Sunday,  a usual market day. The families of rats poured out to get a feast when the people left. Jenner and I stopped when we heard a jeep come along the market path, “QUICK RUN!” I yelled. “Jump into the bush”.  We were too late.

 “Got ya,” said the weird crazy capturing guy.  

 It was too late we were captured by big black men in black coats and beanies. We heard the other rats squeaking their heads off. It was so sad. We thought about Timothy, is he going to be alright?

-Abby

how hunter and i met

It started off with me and hunter playing in the sand pit and I asked if hunter and I could be friends. He ended up saying yes and we got along great, that was when we were 1 and a half.  Now we are at school and about to leave and we are better friends than ever. It is nearly the end of the year. Hunter is a year 6 now so that means he is going to a different school from me but that doesn’t mean we cant be friends anymore. We will be friends forever =)   

Traped-Nikki

The net came crashing down onto us. We chewed and chewed our best but there was NO way we could get free. Later on they were never going to get out. Then someone came charging like a bull right at us.

 

 

 

 

They came and picked us up, were we are going,? I do not know. We got eventually, they let go. We asked " Were are we?"

"Somewhere"

" Were"

 

" You will find out"

The truck rumbled down the road.

Captured -Kieran

We are writing the scene talked about in our class book. The rats tell about when they were living in a village and went to the Sunday market to eat the leftovers. The men from the laboratory come and capture some. This is that part written. Can you build up pictures in your head from our writing. Can you imagine the scene?



As the rats ventured through all of the market there was a sudden, awkward, silence. Then they heard big trucks storming right through the country side. An again another awkward silence but this one was followed by a huge raging attack on the innocent rats, they were everywhere. Left, right and centre.
Then shouting and screaming started from all of the frantic rats became terrified. All of the nets came swinging in on the rats at outragious speeds. One of them swiped down on jenner's tail, as she
escaped free in only a matter of seconds she was trapped again!
It was terrifieing.