Can you see the patterns in this writing? We also tried to use exaggeration and sarcasm!! You may notice some of our writing on the blog - leave us some feedback please.
Friday, June 28, 2013
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Can you see the patterns in this writing? We also tried to use exaggeration and sarcasm!! You may notice some of our writing on the blog - leave us some feedback please.
skoddle reflection
on skoddle I have nearly completed my stars I only need to do personal star and anti bully star. I liked super clubs better and think It should come back do you agree?
IKAN test By Billie W, Evette and Isla
IKAN TEST
Can you find the exaggeration and the sarcasm. Give us feed back in the comments!!
“Hurry up and get out of bed”
“But MUM”
“what?”
“I can’t get out of bed”
“Why”
“I just can’t”
“Why? I’m running late for work”
“My head hurts I think it's broken”
“ Really”
“Yeah”
“time to go to the hospital then” (rolling eyes)
“Oh, no I feel better now”
“uh huh then get out of bed”
“but mum …”
“what? I am late”
“George pinned my pjs to the bed”
“Really i’ll call dad to get the pins out then”
“Oh yeah nah I just got them out”
“as if”
“Um well”
“yes”
“i….”
“keep talking”
“don’t want to..”
“spit it out”
“do the ikan test?”
“Oh my gosh seriously”
See if you can find the Sarcasm and Exaggeration in this piece of writing. Please Comment!
Swimming
Sports
“Time to get up”
“But mum…”
“Yes?”
“My tummy hurts!”
“You are just hungry”
“But mum…”
“What!?”
“I can’t find my hair brush”
“You hate brushing your hair!”
“But mum…”
What now?”
“Aliens stole my school bag”
“You can use your brothers’ old one”
“But mum…”
“There is
nothing for lunch”
“I went
shopping last night”
“But mum…”
“Yes?”
“It’s raining”
“Oh that’s
terrible! What ever shall we do?”
“But mum…”
“Can I help
you?”
“I don’t want
to go to swimming sports”
“Really, well
that’s convenient because swimming sports is tomorrow.”
“I knew that…”
By Zoe and Liam
Homework by Will.i.am Conner ang Patch
Homework
“Do your homework”
“But Dad…”
“What?”
“I want to go see Justin bibber”
“I love Justin Bibber”
“But dad”
“What now”
“Do your homework then I will do mine!”
“I don’t have homework now you do yours!”
“But dad I’m tired”
“It’s only homework”
“But dad”
“What”
“Mum cut it in half”
“That’s like mum”
“But dad”
“What now?”
“I don’t…”
“Say it”
“I don’t want to do my Maths!”
Thursday, June 27, 2013
Patch's reflection on today
I really liked learning about learning. It made me think about if there was on learning the world would not be the same.
I think that learning can really help me to become smarter.
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